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解决了萧愉辰的事情,姜怀雪就想把黄文的事情给解决了。

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp她面无表情、冷静沉着地走到了自己在碧园的院子外,决定一脸冷静地和顾宴清说,“把那黄文给我。”

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp但是当在离自己院子还有十米的时候,她停住了,然后猛然往外跑。

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp不要鄙视,她不是逃跑,而是讲究。

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp顾宴清说的是下午,现在也才中午,她是个严谨的人,当然要等到下午才来啦。

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp姜怀雪一路跑到碧园大门口,决定还是逃避三个时辰,但看到了一道意想不到的身影。

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp他靠在门边上,今日是一身青衣,如松如翠。

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp“你跑什么?”顾宴清靠在门边上,他看见姜怀雪跑过来,就慢慢直起身体。

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp“我——我没跑啊,”姜怀雪一边喘气一边道,“你听我狡辩,啊不是你听我解释……”

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp顾宴清“嗯,狡辩吧,不,你解释给我听。”

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp“哈哈哈……”姜怀雪一边干笑一边朝外挪,然后就被顾宴清给抓住了袖子。

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp“走了,”顾宴清扯着姜怀雪的袖子朝里面走,“狡辩给我听听。”

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp“好的好的,”被抓住,姜怀雪也就放弃了逃跑,关键是逃也没用,顾宴清武力值那么高,让她先跑五十米,顾宴清也一个轻功就追上了。

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp“我,我狡辩给你听……”

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp顾宴清拉着姜怀雪的袖子到了姜怀雪惯住的小院,只见一地金黄的桂花。

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp“这还真是……入眼皆黄啊,”姜怀雪坐在石桌边感叹,又看到顾宴清把她的黄文给拿了出来,心想,这简直太完美了,在一片黄色中搞黄色。

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp姜怀雪连忙挽回自己的形象,“宴清兄,我是个正经的作者,我一般都不会写这些的,这个是顾小云逼我写的!”

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp没错,要不是顾小云抓她,逼她改剧情,她怎么可能写黄文来堵顾小云呢。

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp“顾小云……?”顾宴清喃喃道,是该给顾小云一点小小的教训了。

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp“是啊是啊,”姜怀雪叹气,“我是个无比正经的话本作者!”

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp“嗯,你是个正经的作者,”顾宴清点头,把那一万字打开,推到姜怀雪面前,“但是有些东西还是需要修改,我看了几遍,批注了一些错误之地,比如说这个——”

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp姜怀雪顺着顾宴清的手指看去,只见一片会被晋江口口的东西。

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp“这种姿势,持续不了太久,而且正常人做这个姿势会很痛,你可以换一个……这个姿势名称不对……这个姿势……这个名称有一种更为淡雅的称呼……”

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp“!”

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp姜怀雪满脸震惊地看着顾宴清,已经完全不知道顾宴清在说什么了。

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp顾宴清难道不是那种仙气飘飘,不食人间烟火的人设吗?

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp为何会对黄文颇有心得?

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp他人设崩了啊!

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp“怀雪,所以说这个地方你懂了吗?”顾宴清抬头,只见姜怀雪目瞪口呆。

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp“怀雪,你怎么了?”顾宴清伸手,在姜怀雪眼前晃了晃。

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp“你把这段改一下吧,我在这人看着你改,这些不和逻辑和人的身体的地方我都给你圈出来了。”

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp“改?”姜怀雪回魂,为什么有股课后辅导的感觉?!

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp若不是他们讨论的内容过于和谐,这该是一幕多么温暖的老师课后指导学生的场景。

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp姜怀雪发问,“这怎么改?”

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp顾宴清耐心道,“那?我写一段给你示范一下?”

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp姜怀雪恍惚,“你居然还会写吗?!”

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp然后姜怀雪就看着顾宴清拿着一支笔就开始写,十分钟后就还给了姜怀雪。

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp姜怀雪愣愣地接了开看,只见那纸上写着,“一段古色古香的会被晋江口口的句子。”

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp“宴清兄,你竟也通晓此道?”姜怀雪艰难出声,“不,是你的气质和外貌太有欺骗性了,我还以为,我还以为你——?”

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp姜怀雪大脑宕机,一时语塞。

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp顾宴清接着道,“是不是觉得我无欲无求又气质出尘?”

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp“嗯嗯!”姜怀雪猛然点头,在她眼里,顾宴清一直都是小仙男,不食人间烟火的。

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp顾宴清轻轻笑了一下,撩起垂落在胸前的黑发,“我是对这些东西没有兴趣,但不代表我不知道。怀雪,你懂了吗?”

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp“这样啊……”姜怀雪,“所以说顾兄你知道很多?”

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp顾宴清,“知道一些,但不多。”

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp“来,你先改吧。”

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp顾宴清把纸推到姜怀雪面前,还把笔塞给到姜怀雪手里。

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp事已至此,姜怀雪也就改了。

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp车技,又能提升了呢。

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp顾宴清一阵指导,姜怀雪的黄文变成了一篇古色古香更符合逻辑的黄文。

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp姜怀雪看着自己改完的,更符合逻辑和人体构造而且有些用词变得高端的黄文,觉得自己以后也是个非常有文化的作者了。

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp“改完了吗?”顾宴清道,“拿来我看看。”

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp姜怀雪递了过去,“……顾老师请看。”

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp嗯,等顾宴清看完了,她就能把她的黄文拿回来,然后去找周暮画涩图!

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp顾宴清看了一眼姜怀雪,却把那一万字古色古香已经升华了的黄文放进袖子里,“今日天色已晚,我改日再看。”

&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp&nbsp“啊?”姜怀雪傻眼,“那,那顾老师你什么时候还我?”

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